Mary Sue Test with- Obscurum

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel. 
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon. 
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie. 
4. [X] They are physically strong. 
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. 
6. [X] Their eyes are an unusual color. 
7. [X] This eye color happens to be red. 
8. [X] Their eyes change color. 
9. [ ] They have wings. 
10. [ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. 
11. [X] They are immortal.
12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 
14. [ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. 
16. [X] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. 
17. [X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. 
19. [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. 
20. [ ] They are a healer. 
21. [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 
23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents. 
24. [ ] They ran away from home. 
25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 
27. [ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. 
28. [ ] They never knew their parents.
29. [ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 
31. [X] They have lots of friends/no friends. 
32. [ ] They are emo/cutesy. 
33. [X] They look much younger/older than they really are. 
34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship. 
35. [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.
37. [X] They have an emotional disorder.
38. [X] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [X] They are a psycho. 
40. [X] They have multiple personalities.
41. [X] They are very intelligent. 
42. [ ] They have hallucinations. 
43. [X] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
44. [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. 
45. [X] They have a guardian spirit. 
46. [X] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them. 
48. [X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49. [X] Some part of their body glows. 
50. [X] They have a rare/unusual name.
51. [X] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. 
52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age. 
53. [X] They are connected with a certain element. 
54. [X] They are connected with a certain animal. 
55. [X] They always dress like a certain 'label'. 
56. [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. 
57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood. 
58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something. 
61. [ ] They have a rare blood type.
62. [ ] They cry blood.
63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown. 
64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live 
65. [X] They are very mysterious/dark. 
66. [ ] They are very lively/happy.
67. [X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 
68. [X] They are very patient. 
69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins. 
70. [ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. 
71. [ ] They have amnesia. 
72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 
73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75. [X] They have insomnia. 
Overall Points : 28

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Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

1. [ ] They smoke. 
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 
3. [ ] They are overweight. 
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 
5. [X] They have a short temper. 
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [X] They do not care much about others. 
8. [X] They are relatively emotionless. 
9. [X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
Total: 4


RESULT: 24


0-05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. 
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 :: Mary-Sue. 
Please revise your character... NOW.

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IN MY DEFENSE: Obscurum is from an order of creatures that are meant to be the wielders of elements, and are the very essence of their element. Plus he was meant to be a T-rex and I still snort every time I see the picture of one. So he's supposed to be like this a little bit?

Also I'm surprised the test hasn't asked about anything else.

I need to do this with the others.